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Dance the Day Away - Collaboration With Chris Green

We dance the day away Because we want So much to do but sun outside is shining And nonchalant Instead of work we play Beneath these skies of blue Spinning around Becoming dizzy from the whirling scene Finding the ground Nothing better to do Just little critters see How trampled grass Is mattress for our nature loving lust The day will pass Between just you and me For when the day does end Tangerine beams Will color the wavering horizon Watercolor dreams To slumber now will send *** May 30, 2017 Copyright © Chris Green and Darren White

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Alexis Y.

Date: 5/31/2017 11:49:00 PM

Hi Darren, You and Chris have done it again. This is a great collaboration from you two. I agree, with others bellow that last stanza has Chris all over it. You two write well together. This would have been a HUGE sevrn:-) Alexis

Darren White
Date: 6/3/2017 8:23:00 AM

Thank you Alexis. I love writing with Chris, we have an easy way of letting our thoughts and writings merge, as if it's just one person. Thank you :)

Niall Fulham

Date: 5/31/2017 1:22:00 PM

Hi Darren , Chris , this write just kept getting better and better well done :)))

Darren White
Date: 5/31/2017 1:32:00 PM

Hi Niall, thank you :) Always a surprise to see what avatar you have chosen for this week ;)

Lenna Walker

Date: 5/31/2017 1:12:00 PM

Darren and Chris, Great job guys !! I recognized the style in a couple of lines that I can guess who wrote ....... yes Chris, 'tangerine beams' gives that one away for sure :)

Darren White
Date: 5/31/2017 1:14:00 PM

I am sure he wanted the world to know that the Tangerine Man had been active again ;) Thanks Lenna, we like to write together, sometimes it produces unexpected poems :)