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Daft-Labyrinth

Louise started walking through the hugh corn maze the high hedges and turns the usual craze occasionally she'd run into a dead end but soon her labyrinth walk would be on the mend, She felt like a detective looking for some clues to help her get through and not be confused using her gut feelings she felt she was almost free astonished to find a hugh chunk of cheese. 10-18-17

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Mike Hauser

Date: 10/21/2017 8:01:00 AM

Hahaha!

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 10/21/2017 9:31:00 AM

Glad you got chuckle out of it Mike!~Che :)

Pat Adams

Date: 10/18/2017 9:11:00 PM

I love this poem! I love cheese too! I'm sure I never would have ever thought to put it in a maze. a-MAZE-ing and a FAV for me. Thank you for sharing......80)

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 10/19/2017 8:12:00 AM

Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Pat; glad you enjoyed it so much!~Che :)

Silent One

Date: 10/18/2017 2:50:00 PM

Nice one Cheryl...

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 10/18/2017 7:20:00 PM

Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Silent One; appreciate it!~Che :)

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 10/18/2017 8:59:00 AM

LOL awesome! :) sweet pen, my best to you for the contest! xomo

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 10/18/2017 7:07:00 PM

Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Mo; glad you liked it!~Che :)