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Curious Water...

sun patches move over the ground like curious water after a spill as barn swallows swirl around like a funnel that is losing its fill black birds jump over the field like notes on a music sheet with a pink freckled fawn playing under their groundless feet and receding sulfur butterflies glimmer like farm angels in a snow globe as the now approaching grey hued clouds wear a waterfall robe and I start to run back for cover from the rain that's chasing me from behind but not before I wrote it all down about a poetic flurry within my mind

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/21/2009 7:08:00 PM
Good job on this one Luke. I am glad you wer able to catch it and write it down. Smile. Sincerely, Moses
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Date: 9/29/2009 7:26:00 PM
Jackpot smoke
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Date: 8/6/2009 5:21:00 PM
a beautiful write... enjoyed the ebd as well. Enjoy your night.
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Date: 8/4/2009 4:04:00 PM
Good evening Luke. I enjoyed reading your poetry today. Thank you. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/4/2009 11:38:00 AM
Love it. I love the use of simile here. Keep writing. Sara
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