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"I must write often so, I won't crumble . . ."
Oh, I must write, or fall into shattered pieces; so, I pen my poems all through the night, oh, my masterpieces . . . I love decay . . . like crumbling buildings, walls, grave stones, the withering- of a word on a page that moans; I must pen my sadness that groans, must, must write- so I will not crumble out of sight. ________________________________ May 24, 2019 Poetry/Crumbling Rhyme/"Crumbling" Copyright Protected, ID 19-1146-608-02 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym.
My new invented form I call, Crumbling Rhyme

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Date: 7/31/2019 6:38:00 PM
Absolutely and utterly fabulous!
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 7/31/2019 6:38:00 PM
A FAV for Me!
Date: 6/20/2019 8:28:00 PM
Beautiful verse, Dear Heart, I love the feeling of emotion and feeling. Hugs Eve
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Constance La France
Date: 6/21/2019 2:54:00 PM
Eve, thanks for visiting and for the comment ~
Date: 6/14/2019 7:00:00 PM
I really like your invented form, perhaps if time allows i will try my hand at it! nice poem by the way :)
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Constance La France
Date: 6/16/2019 4:02:00 PM
Sandra, thanks for liking my form. I do hope you will give it a whirl ~
Date: 6/12/2019 7:36:00 PM
Great example for your contest Constance. Love the poem and the new form. I hear my pen calling :)
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Constance La France
Date: 6/13/2019 7:35:00 AM
Charles, thanks for the compliment and I am looking forward to your poem ~
Date: 6/12/2019 2:49:00 AM
I really like this new invented form by you and want to try it Constance. Poets feel that constant urge to write. Beautifully expressed! : ) xxoo
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Constance La France
Date: 6/12/2019 7:56:00 AM
Connie, thanks for the compliment about the form, I am always looking for new and interesting layouts, I bet you write me a beauty !
Date: 6/10/2019 8:55:00 AM
We all (poets) yearn to write...even though the world is crumbling beside us...great example DH...lots of love, and love your contests...^WW^...{*J*}
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Constance La France
Date: 6/10/2019 7:00:00 PM
WW thanks for visiting and looking forward to your entry ~
Date: 6/10/2019 5:48:00 AM
amazing poem Dear Heart, great example for the contest! :) -luloo Be blessed
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Constance La France
Date: 6/10/2019 6:59:00 PM
Lu thank you so much for the compliment ~
Date: 5/25/2019 8:30:00 AM
Nice one...sometimes I feel like your poem...All the best Dear Heart
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Constance La France
Date: 5/25/2019 10:54:00 AM
Arturo, thank you for visiting my poem and commenting, appreciate
Date: 5/24/2019 3:07:00 PM
Beautifully created Constance I love your new form, I too must write, I need to write when I need to write so i totally understand xx
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Constance La France
Date: 5/24/2019 5:33:00 PM
Jan, thanks for visiting and the beautiful, happy you like my new created form~
Date: 5/24/2019 1:55:00 PM
Well written :)
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Constance La France
Date: 5/24/2019 5:33:00 PM
Thank you Heidi!

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