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Creatures Communion

He had a single hand and his right leg limping, His dog was the same kind; they begged for a living. Of the food they received, both shared as co-workers; In the cold, well-cuddled, they slept wrapped as brothers. 30 May 2021 Bite Size Poem 3 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Line Gauthier

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Date: 6/2/2021 10:51:00 PM
Congratulations on HM, Christuraj:) poignant write, at least he had his pet with him:)
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 6/3/2021 12:00:00 AM
Thank you very much.
Date: 6/2/2021 11:46:00 AM
Oh, it touched my heart. Congratulations.
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 6/3/2021 12:00:00 AM
Thank you very much.
Date: 6/2/2021 11:23:00 AM
Dog has always been known to be a man's best friend, especially in bad times. they never leave each other alone in the cold. How I wish humans were like that too. Thank you for your talented verse, Congratulations dear poet friend. :)
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Date: 6/3/2021 12:00:00 AM
Thank you very much.
Date: 6/2/2021 9:37:00 AM
Your words have deeply touched my heart. There is indeed a special, and treasured, "communion" between a dog and owner. Beautifully articulated. Congratulations on your win. Think I will go find my dog and share some "communion." Blessings!
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Date: 6/2/2021 10:49:00 AM
Thank you very much.
Date: 5/30/2021 6:18:00 PM
Wow! This is amazing, Chris! Sure shot winner!
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 5/30/2021 10:25:00 PM
Thank you very much.
Date: 5/30/2021 2:17:00 PM
this is so poignant . I really like it.
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Date: 5/30/2021 10:25:00 PM
Thank you very much.