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Cool, Man

A cool drink on a hot day Is not right in a cheap glass … You need to hear the ice chime. A cool heart in a hot man Is not right for a warm lass … You need to give me more time. A practiced smile on a handsome face Makes me feel like a looking-glass … A warm glance from a plain man is just fine! ............................................... Entry for Brian Strand's contest "One from your anthology"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/18/2012 9:27:00 PM
this is really cool. Great writing and very creative. congrats on your win.
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Date: 2/15/2012 2:27:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Frances. Good write that says a lot.
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Date: 2/15/2012 5:29:00 AM
Congratulations Frances, read this a few times . Love it xx
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Date: 2/14/2012 7:30:00 PM
FRANCES..CONGRATS.... Have a happy valentine days... ~ :-) Always, * PD
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Date: 2/14/2012 6:46:00 PM
Congrats on your great win. I couldn't agree with you more! Happy Valentines with hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 2/14/2012 6:39:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Must truth you have expounded..Way to go..Sara
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Date: 2/14/2012 9:49:00 AM
Frances, this is a wonderful write. Congrats on your HM win in Brian's contest.................S.Ronthorpe
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Date: 2/14/2012 9:43:00 AM
Congrats Frances on winning an HM ...with these interesting words luv..
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Date: 2/14/2012 7:52:00 AM
Beautiful poem.Congrats Frances on your win .
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Date: 2/14/2012 5:56:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's "One From Your Anthology" contest Frances. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/12/2009 12:42:00 PM
very beautiful thoughts! Frances, with perfectly orchestrated structure to maximize thez96xg poem's affect on the reader! nice, jim
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