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Consciousness of Life

A poetic life becomes reality and complete with imagination and expression with a clean slate and full ink well; can taste the wind 's breath and bend like a blade of grass. 11/7/2019

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Date: 12/10/2019 6:58:00 PM
Eve, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this excellent poem, well done !
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Date: 12/9/2019 7:07:00 AM
Eve, those last two lines are enlightened. The epitome of poetic verse. So few times do we actually arrange the words in such a meaningful and deeply thoughtful order. Enjoy the moment, it only comes once in a while. Learning to bend...
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Date: 11/15/2019 9:05:00 AM
This is beautiful.. What a lovely poem.
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Date: 11/9/2019 6:59:00 AM
A lovely expression captured beautifully Eve! I really enjoyed it. Happy Saturday xxoo
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Date: 11/8/2019 7:24:00 PM
that is a lovely epigram, Eve. I really enjoy seeing this form of poetry.
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Date: 11/8/2019 4:10:00 PM
What a lovely description of a poetic life, Eve! ...and the end two lines are beautiful. Hugs // paul
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Date: 11/8/2019 9:29:00 AM
Your ink runs smooth and free
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Date: 11/8/2019 9:25:00 AM
Well penned, lovely write. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 11/8/2019 7:03:00 AM
beautifully penned my friend and so true
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