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Come Here, My Dear- and Have No Fear

Oh, please come here, my dear- and have no fear; I'm here for you- thereto, come comfort me. Though on in years, no fears 'tween us shall be; just hold me near, and we will persevere- together, glow and grow old gracefully. On, please come here, my dear- without dismay; I'll hold your hand and stand beside you now. Though fates for each awaits- with you, I stay and pray that God's kind nod will then avow- together take us, help us wake that day as one- as done in life- through death, allow. January 31, 2020 ~1st Place~ Contest: Rhyme Time 8 Sponsor: Lu Loo Judged: 02/23/2020 Theme Chosen 2: Come here, my dear, and have no fear Rules: Rhyme Scheme ABBAB-CDCDCD plus internal rhyme

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Date: 2/26/2020 5:37:00 AM
I love this, Sandra. A wonderful write...Congrats on your win!
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Date: 2/23/2020 10:51:00 AM
perfect rhythm and rhyme - a true poetess are you...Thank you for your participation and congratulations on your placement. X:-)
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Date: 1/31/2020 12:27:00 PM
A beautiful uplifting poem of affection and long term commitment, love the internal rhyme,you are such a gifted poet Sandra and its lovely to see you posting again:-) hugs Jan xx
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/16/2020 2:53:00 PM
Thank you so much, Jan, for stopping by with your very kind and supportive comments! I appreciate them so much. Hugs, Sandra :)

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