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Colors In the Sun.

the sun shines it warms my pallid skin colors seem brighter though the light will not last soon it will rain and colors wash out but it matters not, i dance in the rain anyway and sing songs to the somber clouds, soon they open and let out the light they guard and it warms my skin once again only to disappear when i sleep whispering faint songs of the stars in my ear as the sky beings to weep.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/6/2010 1:17:00 PM
Very good. Something about the word choices and rhythm remind me of Nikki Giovanni. You have a talent for conveying the sense of "being there" that good writers possess.
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Date: 6/5/2010 10:52:00 PM
Thank you soo much for your comment!! I'm glad you enjoyed my poem! I really like this one, you keep it up as well! :)
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