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Collateral Damage

I look pleadingly into their eyes as they pull the last of my fingernails, The pain is excruciating and I pass out amid my heartrending screams. When I come to I am engulfed in total darkness, I find myself lying naked, it appears, in my own blood, sweat and filth. I try looking around but could see nothing, I touch gingerly and find my eyes swollen shut, My nose punched into a bloody pulp, My lips torn open, all my teeth knocked out. Jesus, where am I? What have they done to me? What do they want of me? I know nothing, I am just a regular Joe struggling to raise a family here, Hoping to live the American dream; What would I know of Jihadi cells or terrorist network? I begin quivering in sheer terror-- Oh God, did they bring me here just because my name is M U H A M M A D?
("Rendition" --The practice of sending a terrorist suspect covertly to be interrogated in a country with less rigorous regulations for the humane treatment of prisoners.
"Show Me Your Spirit" contest by FJ Thomas

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Date: 5/28/2015 4:40:00 AM
This is a heartrending piece, Abdul. This made me ache inside I had to cry. So sorry this happens. a 7. Congratulations on your win! My bad for being so late. Had to catch up with many contest results released one after another.
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Date: 5/22/2015 1:18:00 PM
Abdul, Congratulations on your win. Love LINDA
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Date: 5/19/2015 2:25:00 PM
wow what a powerful piece - the imagery is so intense Abdul - congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Abdul Malik
Date: 5/19/2015 6:31:00 PM
Glad you like it. Thanks
Date: 5/19/2015 1:55:00 PM
Abdul, congratulations on your spirit win poem. SKAT love :)
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