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Gonna wake up At the brink of dawn Take a shower Throw my blue jeans on The little red rooster Is my alarm Cock-a-doodle doodling On my farm Gonna water All of my crops Especially My barley and hops Gonna spread out All the bales of hay Where the goats and the horses And the cattle stay In the pasture Down by the creek Where we went When we wanted to sneak A little moonshine I stole it from my dad The best damn moonshine That I ever had I'm gonna go And see a little rodeo Then I'm going dancing To do the do-si-doe Then I'll stop by Over near the school To jump in the river In our swimming pool Gonna get my little lady A cold bottle of wine And get myself a bottle Of my dad's moonshine Copyright © charles messina | Year Posted 2018 Gonna go give My little lady a red rose Wearin' my boots and plaid shirt She'll think I'm gonna propose Add a stanza to my poem Contest sponsored by Charles Messina

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Date: 8/29/2018 4:12:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work ..Way to go.. Sara
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 8/30/2018 5:54:00 PM
thank you
Date: 8/28/2018 3:05:00 PM
Love your addition to Charlie's poem, Tania. Congratulations on your 1st place win!
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 8/28/2018 4:09:00 PM
thank you, it was second place but I am pleased with that!
Date: 8/28/2018 7:29:00 AM
Tania, this is one of my favorite stanzas. I absolutely loved it and one would never know that I didn't write it. a perfect fit! Thank you so much for entering my contest and Congratulations, on your win! Charlie :)
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 8/28/2018 7:44:00 AM
Thank you, it was a fun and unique contest, thanks for my winning placement!
Date: 7/31/2018 10:25:00 PM
A lovely freedom write...Easy and smooth...I like the rhythm and flow here...All the best Tania
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 8/1/2018 5:10:00 AM
thank you!

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