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Cobwebbed, Dusty Ceiling

I open the old door and it squeaks, then a cobwebbed, dusty ceiling appears... what I find brings me to tears: a moaning cat about to die, his weak heart still beats. If all cats have nine lives as my cat has, this one may know only one because of someone's shameless neglect and cruelty; I check his yellowish eyes, and he dares to meow and lick my compassionate face... as he clings to me for help and sympathy. How did he survive under a cobwebbed, dusty ceiling with no food and water...did he feed on spiders? What about breathing in a sunless room frequented by mice? Oh, he must have had a feast, while burping! Ah, I shouldn't talk about rodents, it makes my hair standup! All I want everyone to know is that the cat is doing well and loves a beefy treat, not something he was forced to eat...oh, poor animal with a fiant heart! No, sweet kitty cat: cobwebs and dust won't fall on you...here it's safe to sleep! Entered in Francine Robert's contest, " Cobwebs And Dust " Written by Andrew Crisci on 3/ 19/2012

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Date: 3/20/2012 5:44:00 AM
Wishing you the best in Francine's contest Andrew. Love, Carol
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