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Coastal Sunset --- Haiku

coastal sunset - dropping into the sea also the juggler's ball Written February 23rd, 2016 For the What Goes Up, Must Come Down Contest hosted by Catie Lindsey

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Date: 9/28/2016 6:33:00 AM
The sea holds a lot of interesting things - to the great ball of fire descending, to the small ball that happened to fall one day off the dock I'd imagine. Beautiful, contemplative haiku! Always, Laura
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Date: 3/5/2016 11:13:00 AM
Aaaaah, this is nothing but a gem.
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 3/6/2016 2:27:00 AM
Thank you Iris :)
Date: 2/24/2016 8:32:00 AM
The juggler's ball is quite creative, Timothy; expect this to do well in the contest, if haiku is a requisite. ~ paul
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 2/24/2016 11:37:00 PM
Unfortunately it's not, so I just hope Catie likes haiku ... lol! In any case it was fun to write regardless ...
Date: 2/24/2016 1:52:00 AM
I like this! Good luck on the contest!
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 2/24/2016 11:36:00 PM
Thanks Susan!

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