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Cinquain IV

water murmurs softly, through the cool of exhaled breath, against the stones it whispers, secrets secrets, gently spoken, lonely unbeckoned words, hidden deep within broken hearts, aching aching, melting sorrow pours viscous and endless, caressing emotions that hide within within this emptiness sprouts the seed of desire, where blooms love’s flower, bathed in sweet water
04/01/2018

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Date: 4/28/2018 2:26:00 PM
Creative form. Flows nicely, just like water.
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James Inman
Date: 4/28/2018 4:26:00 PM
Thank you for your nice comment Juliet.
Date: 4/26/2018 2:05:00 PM
Hello ,James, I also read this poem as a love poem. i enjoyed this poem. Have a nice day my friend.
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James Inman
Date: 4/27/2018 8:41:00 PM
Love's amazing complex secrets Darlene, thank you.
Date: 4/7/2018 10:54:00 AM
I enjoy reading your poetry, James. It conveys a lot of emotion which I love in poetry. Many great lines. A fave for me. T.J
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James Inman
Date: 4/7/2018 11:56:00 AM
Teppo, it's been a while. Nice to hear from you. I hope all is well. Thanks for the nice comment.
Date: 4/1/2018 7:36:00 PM
So much emotion pours from every line ... We can all relate to such deep and powerful feelings, and you express them so well here ... Very nicely done, James!
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James Inman
Date: 4/1/2018 8:09:00 PM
Thank you again Kelly.
Date: 4/1/2018 7:09:00 AM
Beautiful poem - lovely execution, James.
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James Inman
Date: 4/1/2018 7:35:00 PM
Thank you for your kindness Line.