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At first it seemed as if the night had sang Our pine tree lit mostly with an array of decor: Until I watched two boys roaming out the lane, Looking weary -- as if they had nowhere to go-- In the chill of Christmas Eve's near hours.. I asked Mom if these children could drop by, Maybe for apple pies or ginger ale. With gentle smiles, they came around To join us for a feast and Yuletide games. Learning about their father sick for days, Both brothers needed to go caroling for a meal ... Touched, I offered my piggy bank As a little gift without hesitation, That no words could explain this sense of joy In my heart: Quietly my eyes gazed At the angel atop.our evergreen tree glowing like a holy light which made my young head bow to say a Prayer of thanks, While around, tunes of ' Jinge Bells' merrily chimed, Childhood Christmas Memories Sponsor: Bic Gi-Sa 12/2/2017

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Date: 12/4/2017 11:12:00 AM
A very touching poem and a beautiful gesture, Nette, best of luck. John
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Date: 12/3/2017 2:15:00 AM
Excellent. Beautifully written. A touching poem. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 12/1/2017 4:50:00 PM
A warmly written poem, containing precious memories! I wish you luck in the contest, Nette!
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Date: 12/1/2017 3:40:00 PM
Loving memories beautifully described--a touching poem with imagery of Christmas--best for win, nette!
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