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Christmas Dance

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Glittering prettily in the sky His light reflected on the night Spirit of love borne with a sigh Joy and peace so brilliantly bright Dancing on the fallen snow so white Feelings alive, dancing with wonder Breathing a yearning for this child One whose gift is louder than thunder Reflecting the beauty of One so mild He should bring us to God, reconciled Wise men came to see this precious One Lying in a manger, perfect as an embrace Bringing kindness to those who had begun To know the worth of His miraculous grace Worthy is He who came to the human race Hope fills the hearts who know this love Glowing from the One born on this even Filling the spirit with inklings from above Sentiments of inspiration we can believe in When we pray to know Him, to perceive in Christmas is alive – dancing upon the soul Reminding hearts to listen to Jesus’ light The Son who will show us how to be whole Give us the answer to prayers that invite Faith to sing glory to God who will incite winter quintain , Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Francine Roberts December 11, 2021

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Date: 12/13/2021 12:22:00 PM
Christmas is alive! Wow! Nice one.
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Date: 12/13/2021 4:58:00 AM
This is so graceful a poem dear Gina... and what a cute picture of baby Jesus... "One whose gift is louder than thunder"... Loved this line... Best wishes and hugs... ~ Ani
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Date: 12/12/2021 3:47:00 PM
Lovely Gina and the picture is so beautiful and perfect for this piece. Love it. God Bless, JB
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Date: 12/12/2021 1:17:00 PM
yes, this is a very well written poem in the form indicated. Great images, Gina.
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Date: 12/11/2021 2:26:00 PM
Well written Quintain, Gina. retelling of the old old story. Praise God for the gift of eternal life! Thanks for sharing the story of his birth. Hugs, Bill
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