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Christmas Alone

while the world rejoices in a whirlwind of snowflurries under a dark velvet cloak intent my curtains drawn I make myself invisible behind closed doors shunning crowds of gregarious exuberance alone and isolated aloof keeping my distance searching for solace within the quiet of my walls Submitted on December 8, 2019 for contest WRITING CHALLENGE - DECEMBER, 2019- I WANT CHRISTMAS POEMS sponsored by DEAR HEART – WIISHKOBI ODE - RANKED 1ST Originally posted on April 8, 2019

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Date: 12/15/2019 5:15:00 AM
Line, congratulations on your win in my Christmas writing challenge with this wonderfully penned poem, your words dripped sadness. I have had Christmas's exactly like this in the past ~
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Date: 12/15/2019 1:50:00 PM
Thank you so much for your always inspiring challenges, Constance. Most appreciated.
Date: 12/14/2019 3:42:00 AM
Sometimes the crowds during Christmas become over powering. I never entered a store to shop this year. I bought everything online. Thank you Amazon! I can relate! Congratulations on your First Place win Line. Mele Kalikimaka! : ) xxoo
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Date: 12/14/2019 11:45:00 AM
That's the way to do it, Connie. The only way to enjoy the holidays is to pace ourselves. Mele Kalikimaka indeed!
Date: 12/14/2019 2:02:00 AM
Congrats on your winning poem Lin
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Date: 12/14/2019 11:43:00 AM
Thank you so much, Gregory.
Date: 4/9/2019 11:22:00 PM
Perfectly penned... this describes my Christmas ritual of solitude well. Great work! ;)
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Date: 4/10/2019 8:44:00 AM
So many people feel this way. Thanks for your visit and comment, Rhona.
Date: 4/9/2019 5:49:00 PM
I think we do this at time if only in our minds
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Date: 4/9/2019 8:12:00 PM
Yes we all definitely need breaks.
Date: 4/9/2019 8:03:00 AM
You’re not alone Line, I hate Christmas everything stops and life gets dull lol good write
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Line Gauthier
Date: 4/9/2019 10:06:00 AM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Nick. I sympathize.
Date: 4/8/2019 11:47:00 PM
Ah, this describes my Christmas also, and it is much more lovely than others would ever suspect....
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Line Gauthier
Date: 4/9/2019 7:48:00 AM
Yes sometimes we just need to pull back.
Date: 4/8/2019 10:29:00 PM
Nothing wrong with a little peace and quiet. Nice poem. Have a great day.
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Date: 4/9/2019 7:47:00 AM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, David.

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