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Parachute Goes Up and Down

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Children huddled deep beneath parachute, snicker. A summer festive uplifting fun game! They sing, jump ran round rosy red. Quite good friends gather. All fall down. 5/4/2019 Children Story
15 lines long syllable count 2 3 2 3 2, 3 2 3 2, 3 2 3, 2 3, 3

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Date: 5/28/2019 2:26:00 PM
Awesome subject! I always enjoyed those, Congrats!
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Date: 5/27/2019 7:28:00 AM
Wonderful write Eve...Congrats on your win...
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Date: 5/25/2019 8:39:00 PM
Love the ending to this wonderful poem. Congratulations on your win, Eve. ~Charlie
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Date: 5/25/2019 1:34:00 PM
- Congratulations on your great suggestions, Eve :) - // ... a fun contest :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/7/2019 6:49:00 AM
Quite a fun Charlieku! Well done.
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Date: 5/5/2019 3:33:00 PM
oh how fun, Eve. Can't wait to try this one You make it look it very easy!!
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Date: 5/4/2019 1:38:00 PM
- Sounds like a fun day ... lovely written, Eve - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/4/2019 1:34:00 PM
You've set the standard with this new form Eve. Good luck. Tom
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