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Changing By Learning

Changing my writings the first words written innocence initially intended changing the format, the colors leaving emotions openly displayed Changing the long to short , revising all thoughts for it is left for the readers perception always in changes one opens a door through changing I will learn through a lesson Is this poem worthy of mention ?

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Date: 10/23/2013 1:05:00 PM
Hi Shanity :) Enjoyed your free verse win.......... Love ~ SKAT~
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Date: 10/24/2013 8:28:00 AM
Thank-you my beautiful, well spoken friend !
Date: 10/22/2013 10:46:00 AM
Congrad's on your win free verse is a favorite form of mine. Light & Love
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Date: 10/22/2013 10:58:00 AM
Thank-you Debbie , I love all the unique forms I have found here on this site , I am not sure you know, but you all have become Teachers ~ I have always loved to write.
Date: 10/21/2013 2:47:00 PM
Swirling around in thought and indecision, always hoping to leave our best impression. A very thoughtful write and congrats on your win :)
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Date: 10/22/2013 12:19:00 AM
Thank-you my beautiful friend , inside your spirit and outside , Shanity ;)
Date: 10/20/2013 10:25:00 PM
Congrats on the win in the contest, Shanity
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Date: 10/21/2013 12:07:00 PM
Thank-you My Doctor of so many words ! You are so faithful in honoring everyone here , I notice you have such a beautiful soul. You take the time to honor all , in contest ..this tells me so much about you truly being a Poet and Doctor !
Date: 10/20/2013 9:14:00 PM
Shanity,, CONGRATULATIONS!!! Thanks for supporting my "FREE VERSE" contest <----- Had fun reading your WIN!! If you'd like:-) Enjoy my latest blog! "THE FOOL" :) AT -----> http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=17055&PoetID=18720 xoxox-------take care & enjoy your coming week. <3 Linda <3
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Date: 10/21/2013 12:03:00 PM
Thank-you my artist and poetess , when I think of all you have inspired me too write , you have become a Teacher in my eyes , to win , is a honor !

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