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Chances, Or How To Be a Complete Idiot At 4am After You'Ve Had a Few Beers.

the moon it never rises except when i go to sleep and the sun it never sets except when i sit and weep yet i long for you i ache for you my life seems incomplete so i lie in bed and curse and moan underneath the sheets it cuts me deep it cuts me hard and it only gets harder as time advances so i stand outside in your yard and take all my chances

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Date: 3/13/2011 8:24:00 PM
You had better start looking for other women. This is decently descriptive.
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Date: 10/16/2010 1:56:00 PM
lol cute, for taking that chance, enjoyed,..P.D.
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Date: 10/16/2010 5:05:00 AM
yep that is a true heartfelt idiot/stalker....LOL
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Date: 10/16/2010 4:58:00 AM
Very depressive thoughts on the loneliness and yearning for romance, Daniel
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Date: 10/15/2010 9:39:00 PM
love it, especially the title
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