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secret Mountain Rescue - the Return -

Dances with eagles in skinny oxygen Silence is regal, time is an abstract I humbly look up, at your majestic existence So still, so cold, so proud, but so much like me… So timid in the slap of the Northern winds So in love with love So much shaken by earthquakes of Human Nature grinning in colliding plateaus with deep faults. In the blind of darkness I only have your secret, inner warmth Lava of our Souls perforates geological barriers, Layer after layer of memories of past lives…remember? Our underwater games, the Raising above our Black Sea level The playful puffs of steaming magma cooling off dreams into Reality… I see dances of eagles shooed by a deafening propeller I float in a basket above you: I AM THE QUEEN OF THE WORLD !!! …and I can fly in the eternity and beyond!!! You remain smiling coldly , nostalgically still, endlessly Majestic As I become smaller, and smaller, and smaller In a minuscule Black Hole where mountains become Gods As I turn into a still, cold, and proud abstract in the Rotunda of my childhood Gardens back home…
for John's Contest

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Date: 10/14/2010 4:49:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 9/27/2010 5:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Iolanda in John Freeman's contest "Your Free Verse Precept" Love,Carol
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Date: 9/26/2010 6:24:00 PM
Awesome Iolanda! your poetic mind shines out congrats to you!
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Date: 9/26/2010 5:41:00 PM
I had not seen this one was judged, but wow, this is superb!! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 9/26/2010 2:36:00 PM
My congratulations on your superb win in John's "Free Verse" Contest, Iolanda..Thanks for the kind comments also! Enjoy!! Love, Audrey
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Date: 9/26/2010 10:21:00 AM
Congratulations on this msuper win in the contest, Iolanda
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Date: 9/26/2010 10:10:00 AM
"I related to your soar with Eagle wings Iolanda." Congratulations" you certainly do have a beautiful flight in your verse! Love it! Agape, Moses
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Date: 9/21/2010 5:02:00 AM
O poezie foarte frumoasa, Iolanda, imi da o senzatie de melancolie cand o citesc. PS: Multumesc din suflet pentru carte. Sper sa ajunga in curand. Cu drag ,Emilia
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Date: 9/20/2010 4:00:00 PM
This Poem is just beautiful, Iolanda, many beautiul and Agaping words, John will love it, I am sure~~
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Date: 9/20/2010 7:08:00 AM
Silence is regal, time is an abstract . What a nice expression of thoughts, Iolanda
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Date: 9/20/2010 4:03:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your work in this one...I especially like the last line of the second stanza..Good luck in the contest..Reads like a winner..Sara
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