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Cast Your Gaze

Cast your gaze along earth's end where smiles dawn upon a friend take a little peek within his soul see right where love has grown A seed has sown slowly watch it bloom brightening up the cloud and the doom with a tender touch and a solid base precious flowers can now embrace Take hold a soul with grace and care in times of doubt, in dread or fear for deep inside your answers rest to many questions put unto the test Down low in the valley where beauty roams His heart will be waiting, to call your own

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 4/16/2017 5:49:00 PM
Very well written and soft kind poem!
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Date: 4/12/2017 7:06:00 PM
I'm thinking this one may have been for Darren. No matter, it's gentle on anyone who craves gentleness. Lovely Tim.
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Date: 4/12/2017 5:44:00 PM
Good Evening Tim. And so it begins. Oh the wonderful feeling of it all. Your entry is perfect in every poetic way. Need I say more. I think not. It was an honor turning to your page tonight. Well done in its entirety. Honestly
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Date: 4/12/2017 3:55:00 PM
I do believe one can feel the love transmitted in this poem ..The love in his heart for her...Such a beauty this is Tim...Very beautiful.
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Date: 4/12/2017 3:13:00 PM
- A beautiful poem with great rhyming, Tim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/12/2017 3:06:00 PM
This is so nice Tim. ! Very well written :)
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Date: 4/12/2017 3:05:00 PM
This poem has a melody all its own that comes across softly caring and deeply endearing. This was beautiful Tim.
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Date: 4/12/2017 2:51:00 PM
This is so beautiful Tim. That first stanza is powerful and loving. This heart and soul are to be loved, and are loved. Good night my friend, see you tomorrow.
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