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Cascading Waterfall

The gray hair pinned in bun Was conservative and plain But when her gray hair fell Like the waterfall did cascade Being gently blown by the breeze His love for her was the same____Maybe more As when his eyes beheld her Many and many years before (I was not going to post this one but my daughter said that it is beautiful, therefore, I thought that I would share.)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 1/11/2010 2:33:00 PM
Nice write Sara, and Doris was right >> James
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Date: 1/11/2010 12:41:00 AM
Congrats on your succes in the recent contestSara.Rgds Brian
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Date: 1/10/2010 8:10:00 PM
Forever romantic it is Sara. I agree with your daughter it is beautiful. Sincerely, Love, Moses
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Date: 1/10/2010 7:35:00 PM
It sure is a beautiful poem, very inspiring too with great imagery, Sara. Thanks for sharing and thank you for your comments on mine today. Best wishes, Caroline.
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Date: 1/10/2010 3:08:00 PM
Indeed thank you for sharing. A peice eloquently written, just beautiful. Caryl
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Date: 1/10/2010 2:05:00 PM
Beautiful write, Sara. You really see how beautiful a woman is when she has matured! Thanks for sharing this. Peace, Audrey
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Date: 1/10/2010 2:04:00 PM
Thanx for sharing.it's nice.I posted a new poem I think you will like.
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Date: 1/10/2010 12:36:00 PM
Hi Sara, I'm so glad you posted this beautiful poem. Here's to this deep abinding love you share, this is what I call good food for the soul. Keep writing dear Sara. Love Light Patty
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Date: 1/10/2010 12:30:00 PM
And I'm glad you shared it! Your daughter was right... And thanks for letting your hair down too!...Tim
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