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Carbon Monoxide (CO) Week 1: O.D.A.A.T.

Chain smoke until
I'm in care of the CO.
There's one left, still.
I smoke it really slow.
"It's the end," I anticipate
As the last inch evaporates.

I can't get
Over it;
It's over before 
I know it.
Butt, I can't quit.
I'm possessed with this 
Obsession; I'm addicted.

My lungs have oxygen,
Yet I'm suffocating inside.
I can't breathe again
Without my 'noxide.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Date: 7/3/2009 2:36:00 PM
I like this one it is very hard to quit smoking indeed!
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Date: 6/30/2009 6:43:00 PM
I did quit (a hundred and twenty five pounds ago.). I guess you could say quitting has made me a well "rounded" person. Vince
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Date: 6/28/2009 4:09:00 PM
I've heard that it is very difficult to quit smoking. Never give up, though. It could add years to your life. Very nicely portrayed. Keep writing.
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Date: 6/25/2009 7:29:00 PM
I could not have quit without Gods divine intervention. He through his grace saw fit to release my desire, renew my willpower, and forget that I even had the nasty habit. This after three packs a day for the last 20 or so years. I am truly blessed. -AA its been 5 years now since I quit.
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Date: 6/25/2009 12:16:00 AM
Love This One=)!
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