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Can I Say

Shaking earth, you call me? Can I say, some moment please? Just had my meal, pretending to sleep The hustle of life-chants me a lullaby, helping me to forget the lows This small hut, my modest abode- Made of clay, a part of your life. It’s trembling now, falling into pieces I am not asking for more, I know it’s yours- the soil and we mortals both The air we breathe and the sound of wind- this and more and henceforth But can’t bear the pain, the fellows cry, how can you show no empathy Just had my meal, pretending to sleep Can I say, some moment please?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 5/6/2015 1:27:00 PM
Hi SKAT, Hi Linda! Thanks so much for the warm welcome!! Loved the energy! :) About myself- I am a happy-go-lucky girl, learning life by the experiences. Happy writing!! :)
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Date: 5/4/2015 3:23:00 PM
Swati, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 5/4/2015 2:52:00 PM
Swati, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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