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The poem is below.


Stay away from me
Our good times have gone away
Cheaters never win
Come on sing me a sad song
So I can laugh, while you cry
Written for: "Tanka"me" a sad song Contest Sponsored by: ~P.D.~ Written by: Carol Brown 6th Place Winner

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Date: 9/12/2014 3:21:00 PM
Very good Tanka, Carol! Yes, cheaters get caught sooner or later. And like the say, And what goes around, comes around" sad but nice poem! Best to you Carol! xxxx D.
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Date: 8/3/2013 7:16:00 AM
And winners never cheat! I love it.
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Date: 1/11/2013 9:11:00 PM
yes.. a wonderful win in my contest... sad i must say...pd
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Date: 12/5/2012 7:40:00 AM
Carol....this write is judicious! Love it! Congrats on your win! Hugs
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Date: 12/4/2012 2:34:00 PM
Good write.... Seems that you'v won - Trevor
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Date: 10/23/2012 7:23:00 AM
One of the most painful words to hear for me is "Good bye". It was such a perfect topic chosen for the theme and form my dear friend. My big congratulations on your awesome win! love/hugs:) Leonora
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Date: 10/23/2012 4:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your fine win Carol xx
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Date: 10/22/2012 3:49:00 PM
Way to go in PD's contest a well deserved win for you, carol.
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Date: 10/22/2012 12:35:00 PM
Congratulations on your win friend Carol :) I can relate to your poem (^_^) nice tanka!!
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Date: 10/22/2012 11:52:00 AM
Thank you all for the comments and congrats. They are always appreciated. Love, Carol XXXX
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Date: 10/22/2012 9:11:00 AM
Carol many congrats on your win...great write!!!
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Date: 10/22/2012 7:21:00 AM
Congrats on another win with this one!
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Date: 10/21/2012 4:18:00 PM
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Date: 10/21/2012 2:40:00 PM
great job Carol, congrats on your win
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Date: 10/21/2012 11:51:00 AM
Carol, congratulations with your to be or not to be tanka poem in my contest... take care of yourself' always~PD
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Date: 10/16/2012 8:22:00 AM
I like the anger in this - nicely done! good luck in the contest :)
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Date: 10/12/2012 5:43:00 AM
This is so touching! loved it!
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Date: 10/11/2012 9:36:00 AM
intriguing lines!
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Date: 10/11/2012 12:24:00 AM
very nice,,,, I like it Carol ;}
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Date: 10/10/2012 7:59:00 PM
Bye- Bye indeed, a very nice expressed Tanka, Thanks for sharing it, God bless you. Hugs! Erich
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Date: 10/10/2012 10:50:00 AM
I see you got on top of the twist here Carol Thank you for your kind comment on my Poems feature.."
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Date: 10/10/2012 5:58:00 AM
Just rewards! Great Tanka... tanka you very much! LOL Hugs, happy thoughts and much love, Jack xox
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Date: 10/9/2012 11:06:00 PM
Yes, this is GREAT.
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Date: 10/9/2012 5:49:00 PM
Nailed it! And funny, really nice.
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Date: 10/9/2012 2:56:00 PM
Yeah Carol. Cheaters never win. Nicely pen'd!
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