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By The Ocean Being Me

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By The Ocean Being Me

I see it all 
It’s beautiful
What I do see
This mystery
That makes me feel so all alone
Such sweetness in my heart has grown
It is so fine
This world is mine
I sip some wine
Feels so divine
As sunset reaches out to me
The sky is red deliciously
Such loveliness, me, I do see

Life is so grand
As here I stand
So soft the sand
In this sweet land
The ocean looks so beautiful
It’s lovely as the rain does fall
Seagulls they fly
There in the sky
Their wondrous cries
Oh my, oh my
They fill me full of mystery
This is the space I love to be
All by myself just being me

10 October 2016


(Pedro's 72 Beat) Created by Peter Duggan
4 x 4 all same end rhyme A
2 x 8 with same end rhyme B
4 x 4 all same end rhyme C
3 x 8 with same end rhyme D etc. is that what you see

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Date: 1/29/2019 5:08:00 AM
Nirvana expressed in this poem, especially these lines: "This is the space I love to be All by myself just being me."
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sidney dugan
Date: 1/29/2019 4:52:00 PM
Hi Caren. I don't know about enlightenment and Nirvana But I do love the joy within my soul, that comes to me from self enquirment. and meditation. They have taken all neurotic fear away from me. Thank you, my friend for your kind comments, I appreciate....Peter
Date: 1/27/2019 10:22:00 PM
A wonderful poem Sidney, and certainly sounds like a place I would like to be and see. Good luck in the contest. Very well written. Poetry hugs, Jennifer
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sidney dugan
Date: 1/27/2019 10:48:00 PM
Hi Jennifer our oceans are all around us and all so beautiful. We have lovely lakes too. I don't do contests, my friend. I am not a friend of competition. I thank you for your kind words, my friend....,Peter
Date: 1/27/2019 6:48:00 PM
G'day Peter … surely you'll have these lyrics in your song book. I reckon it will come up well - thanks Peter - Lindsay
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sidney dugan
Date: 1/27/2019 10:59:00 PM
G'day Lindsay Thank you my friend for your kind comments. I gave up on music a long while ago, but I still have my songs on cd's, Sometimes I even listen to them wondering if they are good or Bad LOL. Have a great day, mate....Peter