Trapped

trapped in prison cell the mind set free ~ butterfly through bars posted on October 7, 2018

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Date: 10/10/2018 2:02:00 AM

I like the image of that butterfly carrying the man's spirit far away from the prison

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/10/2018 7:36:00 AM

Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Timothy.

Date: 10/8/2018 10:47:00 AM

Excellent contrast and irony. Well done! ~ Gershon

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/8/2018 2:53:00 PM

Yes, Gershon. How true, there is definitely irony. We are our own worst enemies when it comes to feeling imprisoned...

Date: 10/8/2018 7:35:00 AM

If they locked me up I would have to dream all day long, letting my butterfly mind flow freely through the bars.

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/8/2018 10:16:00 AM

And you would be the best at it< caren. Nonetheless, hopefully you will never have to prove it.

Date: 10/7/2018 9:25:00 PM

Enjoyed! One to ponder!

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/7/2018 11:03:00 PM

Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Kim.

Date: 10/7/2018 7:25:00 PM

There is great freedom to be found when we use our minds, We can travel the so many mystical places that way. Nice haiku Line,

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/7/2018 7:36:00 PM

Yes, Pixie. Thanks for your lovely visit and comment.

Date: 10/7/2018 6:05:00 PM

a deep one, Line.

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/7/2018 7:37:00 PM

Thanks for your visit and comment, Andrea.

Date: 10/7/2018 2:08:00 PM

So intriguing! Enjoyed :) Happy Thanks Giving my friend! xomo

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/7/2018 7:37:00 PM

Thank you for your lovely visit and comment, Maureen.