Butt Out

I got dressed in a rush - I didn’t take care I’d forgotten to put on any underwear! Your Best Rhyming Couplet Poetry Contest Sponsored by L MILTON HANKINS 09/24/21

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Mark Koplin

Date: 10/4/2021 8:02:00 AM

I think we've all had those days.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 10/1/2021 12:12:00 PM

I can understand, and am delighted thinking of it.

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 9/30/2021 7:23:00 AM

Well done, made me smile...Delice

Gary Radice

Date: 9/28/2021 8:50:00 AM

The penny's just dropped regarding the title :) Cheers - Gary

Christopher Flaherty

Date: 9/27/2021 3:47:00 PM

Forgetful commando Jan Never gets her knickers in a twist

Jack Horne

Date: 9/27/2021 4:45:00 AM

LMAO- LOVE it. So glad to see all the recent stress hasn't dimmed your sense of humour, my friend. I was just remembering an old lady at a bus stop who had her dress tucked in her knickers at the back, LOL - good thing she had her knickers, I suppose...

Paul Callus

Date: 9/26/2021 1:05:00 PM

That's a jolly good one, Jan :) I can hear the wolf whistles :) Hugs // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/26/2021 12:13:00 PM

I have done this before . Ha!!!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/26/2021 7:55:00 AM

Let's hope there will not a whirlwind :) Hugs.

Mike Gentile

Date: 9/26/2021 4:54:00 AM

That must have been quite a rush Jan!! Good one!!! Happy Sunday xxoo

Rico Leffanta

Date: 9/25/2021 11:18:00 AM

I would say it is good to be carefree but in your case, its best to be air-free? Enjoyed! Aloha! Rico

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 9/25/2021 9:09:00 AM

Whoops, I"d say you got your panties in a bunch but there are no panties :)

Alexis Y.

Date: 9/25/2021 8:48:00 AM

Lol! Jan, This is a good entry for the contest. Good title and play on words. Best wishes for the contest. Have a wonderful weekend:-) Alexis

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/25/2021 7:04:00 AM

Ha ha, good one and perfect play on words with the title.

Caycay Jennings

Date: 9/24/2021 5:41:00 PM

So cute, as Regina said, also a little personal for me - I did just that this morning. Made it all the way to the car before I started laughing at myself while heading back inside. I hope no one reads this but you, (yeah, right). I've been mostly gone from Soup for about a year and I've missed you and your poems. I hope all is well with you and yours. CayCay

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 9/24/2021 2:59:00 PM

So cute! You could do such a great book of Humor poems! Love it. God bless you Jan. Love, Gina