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Burning Embers

There’s a glow coming from her tender heart Sweet escape from the bustle of the world She holds my gaze as I desire each part A true harbor of my love, she’s this girl She allows me in, giving me a whirl There are some burning embers that’s nearby Producing a wondrous amount of joy Not knowing her heart I would surely die But I hold her near me, I quite enjoy Her desire to love me, I must employ We expect time to work with us tonight Our hearts will beat together with embers Those that burn brightly within the warm light Our love shall break evil from grand towers We beseech growth from beautiful flowers The burning embers glow with such power A tremendous feeling of warmth inside Deeply felt, love that never was sour Emotion that lasts over and beside Just how love appeals, nothing more abides
Russell Sivey Entrant into Gail Angel Doyle's "Burning Embers" contest 2/2/2013

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Date: 2/22/2013 8:00:00 AM
Congrats Russell on your well deserved win. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 2/22/2013 12:44:00 AM
Hi congratulations Russell, a lovely write and well deserving of a winning spot... hoping for more time next week for more reading and commenting xx
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Date: 2/21/2013 6:18:00 PM
Congrats on your win!!!
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Date: 2/21/2013 5:23:00 PM
And it's a winner !!! Congrats Russell !! Enjoyed the read.
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Date: 2/21/2013 5:10:00 PM
Hi Russell, congratulations! in Gail's "Burning Embers " contest.. a delightful burring poem.. always~ PD
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Date: 2/2/2013 9:02:00 PM
Very Impressive !!!...enjoyed so very much your great Tallent ...amazing write <3 have a wonderful weekend my friend :)
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Date: 2/2/2013 5:59:00 PM
Very passionate and romantic work that you have penned for the contest..The descriptive work almost puts me there..Enjoyed reading..Thanks for stopping by..I hope that you make it through the snowy days ahead with a smile..It is colder here but it is not suppose to last very long..Sara
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Date: 2/2/2013 5:02:00 PM
Dear Russell, an elegant and deep flow exposed while reading your poem. You appeared incomplete without this persons love. The allusion and impressions you accessorize off this burning Ember, are not the same my fiance and I share. I love the eager and deep craving of this beautiful passion. Thank you for taking us deep into the ember glow of the longing power. It was a pleasure ceasing my day here just to read your latest poem. Thank you. xox~ LINDA
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Date: 2/2/2013 2:46:00 PM
Very beautiful and I would wish the whole world could find this kind of joy. Just beautiful
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