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Burlesque

Upon the aged wooden stage of life a show of Burlesque did played a grand ballet of lampoon, mockery and imitation fell as the curtain was raised a farewell performance of Lady Petite and her partner Sir Dapper Galahad honor and prestige would soon be long forgotten as the antics appeared full steam with theatric's divine in a serious life story of a flower swaying in the wind the stage rolled energy with twirling streamers gripped tight in each hand and vibrate attire of outfits grand colors splashed and movement superb I settled in as the show did begin with the symphony rhythm slowly building at hand as the ballet played on in graceful shadow all seemed to go astray without much notice the accompanying symphony began a frantic comical display trumpets blared uncontrolled as each violin screeched in a confusing rage with symbols crashing and hard notes hammered upon the piano ivory both dancers scurried to keep up with the maddening musical pace losing rhythm as the winds built strong with violent crashing waves laughter filled the theater complete, with smiling warmth on each face entwined in their silken streamers, a hopeless thought emerge their feet now unable their bodies entangled tears of laughter spilled into the streets crashing about arms and legs in a bind the audience hunched over unable to breath the dancers visibly tickled haphazardly rolled of the stage O' this dramatic travesty and a delightful one at that! this graceful flowering performance had turned to a frantic blossoming mess Burlesque......................... _____________________________ cONteSt~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 9/27/2011 11:10:00 PM
Rick, I'm here to give all my old contest winners a late congratulations. Sorry, I forgot to leave everyone a thank you *comment* of appreciation~ I hope you don't mind my copy paste congratulations.. Don't worry I have read every entry more than 3 times. lol. or how else would have I closed it with out reading. Can you accept my apology and old congrats on your poem.. Honestly I don't like my contest winners with out a quick congrats,.. thank you,..p.d. the late bloomer
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Date: 9/24/2011 10:41:00 PM
Yes, I remember this one from a past contest. Congrats again, Rick!!
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Date: 9/24/2011 6:02:00 PM
Congrats Rick on another great win with this dazzling delight of twisted poetry my friend.. oh lots of luv.. happy weekend...
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Date: 9/24/2011 5:38:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with your twisted poetry ^Rick. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/24/2011 11:40:00 AM
A great read Rick. Congratulations. Proud to share fourth place with you.
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Date: 9/24/2011 4:31:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of P.D., Rick
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Date: 4/16/2011 11:16:00 AM
Many congrats on you well-deserved Win, Rick. Love, Elaine
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Date: 4/13/2011 3:29:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 4/13/2011 11:26:00 AM
Big Congratulations, Rick on your Honorable Mention in Miranda's contest, " Burlesque Boutique." I am reading it with awe...it's a very humorous poem written by one of my favorite poets. I wish you continued inspiration and success. God bless and smile. Peace and Love, Andrew.
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Date: 4/13/2011 5:42:00 AM
Congratulations for your win ^Rick in the contest "Burlesque Boutique" sponsored by Miranda Lambert. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/13/2011 3:49:00 AM
Many Congratulations Rick on your HM in this Burlesque Boutique contest.Nice write. Gautami
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Date: 4/12/2011 11:26:00 PM
Rick this seems to be historical? Like something that really happened. If it's not, you sure did a good job making me think so!! You put a lot of work into this one. It's very obvious. Congrats on HM. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 4/12/2011 5:18:00 PM
You know I can tell you have seen this!! I have never seen real burlesque, quite a joy to go there with you! Thank you. Congrad's on your fine verse winning. For me a definite in the top 3 ;) Light & Love
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Date: 4/12/2011 4:51:00 PM
Congrats. on your HM success. Rick. Agape, Moses
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Date: 4/12/2011 1:14:00 PM
Many congratulations Rick on your win in Randa's contest....:)
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Date: 4/12/2011 9:42:00 AM
Congrats Rick on your HM in the Burlesque contest with this fantastic write my friend.. enjoy another very special honor for awesome poetry luv..
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Date: 4/12/2011 9:19:00 AM
Congratulations on the HM win in the contest, Rick
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Date: 4/1/2011 6:05:00 AM
rick! the comedy of " art" distinctly portrayed here.. i like how your creative mind works... original!! winning wushes to you! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 4/1/2011 4:12:00 AM
Quite funny to think of the dancers trying to keep up with the rhythm, Rick. Wishing you success in the contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/31/2011 7:44:00 PM
One dynamic write Rick my friend.. good luck in the contest by Miranda luv.. she will luv this piece ...eloquent word usage luv..
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