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Bubbly Shower In May

Pearly gust strewn across the field By an out-pour that glistens the view; Its trickling dash jiggles on trees As lucent taps kiss my wet cheeks! Until cloudburst spills more potpourri That in one early May shower, I whirl with moistened earth new garlands-- A rhythmic flow of bubbly dance Making me naturally quenched, refreshed, In a pool of childlike sway—wild and free! May Showers Contest Sponsor: Nayda Ivette Negron 5/7/2017<

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Date: 5/9/2017 5:52:00 PM
FAntastic write, Nette. I think I will see this one high on the winners' list.
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Date: 5/9/2017 1:16:00 PM
I love spring showers, Nette, and your beautiful poem goes to prove that I am not the only one! I love the movement which flows, twirls and spills across these lines. ~ Hugs // paul
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Date: 5/8/2017 2:29:00 PM
Okay, now I am completely captivated by how natural and free this free-flowing poem is penned!
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Date: 5/7/2017 11:16:00 PM
Nette STOP it!!!! enough!!!! All of Canada will be underwater soon! LOL not sure if you have seen the news but it just wont stop raining here!! All kidding aside, you wrote a very lovely poem! :)
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Date: 5/7/2017 1:48:00 PM
- A delightful poem, Nette - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/7/2017 10:03:00 AM
Delightful verse! With a shower like this, I'm ready to just get happily wet!
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Date: 5/7/2017 9:50:00 AM
Feels like "Singing in the Rain" with Gene Kelly. Radiant poem woven in style and mood!
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