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Sometimes . . . when the hour tickles three and it is just you and me ( bubbles and laundry ) My thoughts begin to linger you see, but, how can this be? . . I am content, I am happy and free Ohhh yes, this messy, messy hair- these painted lips of mine, sweet like strawberries from the vine Blowing bubbles, bubbles in the falling air ( this must be why you like to stare ) I am not unaware Maybe I am thinking too much, just longing for your touch I cannot rush this, our time of sweet bliss the warmth of your kiss Yet, it is just you and me ( bubbles and a fantasy ) how can this be?? Being content, being happy and free blowing bubbles, bubbles, those bubbles in the calling air Sometimes . . . when the hour tickles three ---------------------- ~ Because a playful mood lingers ~ Just a fun little scribble

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Joseph May

Date: 4/1/2019 3:04:00 PM

A taste of strawberry wine tickles the fancy...Beautiful write Brandy..

Brandy Nicole
Date: 4/1/2019 6:36:00 PM

:) Thank you Joseph. So "Sweet" of you to stop by and read this little scribble of mine. Your thoughts bring a smile. ~ Brandy

Robert Pettit

Date: 8/16/2018 6:48:00 PM

You describe very cute kinds of bubbles with vivid descriptiveness and impressive rhyming.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 8/16/2018 7:17:00 PM

:) This was fun to create. And I did blow bubbles while waiting on the laundry. A few times, just lingering in thought. Thank you Robert for your kind words. ~ Brandy

Charles Messina

Date: 7/28/2018 6:10:00 AM

I like how you did this, a very fun read indeed. And also, I thank you for reminding me that I NEED TO DO MY LAUNDRY..lol Love this...:) Charlie

Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/28/2018 7:57:00 AM

Awe, and you are welcome for reminding you to do your laundry. :) I enjoyed writing this playful poem indeed. Thank you for your sweet comment. ~ Brandy

Tobey Hill

Date: 7/23/2018 9:39:00 AM

The title had me thinking bath time and it turned out to be Bubba-licious bubblegum. Bubbles and laundry, cute combination. Now blowing bubbles while in a bubble bath, that's a combo! Enjoyed reading your new works...TAH

Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/23/2018 11:07:00 AM

Blushing. :) Yes, Bubbles in the bath are fun and exciting. After blowing bubbles and waiting on the laundry, I might have to linger in that bubble bath, while blowing bubbles. :) Thank you Tobey for reading this playful poem of mine. ~ Brandy

Sylvia Coulstock

Date: 7/21/2018 10:38:00 AM

You’ve done it again Brandy.So soft and sweet and might I say light and airy like the bubbles in your piece.I adore all your little “scribbles”.Thank you for the pleasure they bring me.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/21/2018 11:39:00 AM

Your thoughts always bring a smile SYLVIA. I am happy that you enjoyed this fun little scribble of mine. :) Brandy

John Gondolf

Date: 7/21/2018 10:29:00 AM

Bubbles and a fantasy at 3 AM...I’ve had some of those fantasies but never with bubbles, I should try that...I enjoyed this fun little scribble, Brandy. John

Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/21/2018 11:13:00 AM

Could be 3 A.M. or 3 P.M. :) Either way, bubbles and the laundry, a perfect combination, I think. (Soft giggle) There is something enjoyable about being playful. With words!! Thank you John. ~ Brandy

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/21/2018 1:29:00 AM

This fun little scribble leaps and jumps off the page in a gleeful way. A delight to read, Brandy.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/21/2018 7:43:00 AM

:) Thank you Caren. Yes, sometimes, I do blow bubbles while waiting on the laundry. My mind lingering. I enjoying writing this very much. ~ Brandy