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those innocent days with my two young brothers are sweet memories to recall when we spent our days dreaming oh, how I loved to tell them stories as we snuggled close together how, I wish to turn back the pages to those innocent days those days of simplicity when the future was far away I wish that I could have protected them from all the struggles that they have faced in life but, today my mind only wants yesterday when I snuggled with my brothers and life was innocent and when joy came so easily in the telling of made-up stories to two little boys ___________________ May 22, 2021 Poetry/Verse/brothers Copyright Protected, ID 05-1357-431-22 All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, All Yours (May 23) sponsor, Brian Strand, Judged 05/23/2021 First Place

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Date: 5/28/2021 11:03:00 AM
Ahh!! How nice it would be to enjoy that connection for you. Congrats on this winner. Sara
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Constance La France
Date: 5/28/2021 3:43:00 PM
Sara, thank you for the comment and the congrats, appreciate, love _Constance
Date: 5/23/2021 5:30:00 AM
Congratulations!
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Constance La France
Date: 5/23/2021 10:15:00 AM
Christuraj, thank you for the congratulations, peace _Constance
Date: 5/22/2021 4:55:00 PM
A heart warming write, Constance! Blessings, Kim M
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Constance La France
Date: 5/23/2021 10:15:00 AM
Kim, thanks for the comment, love _Constance
Date: 5/22/2021 3:24:00 PM
This is so beautiful and elegantly delivered..some memories are precious!
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Constance La France
Date: 5/23/2021 10:16:00 AM
Vijay, thank you for the compliment, appreciate, love _Constance
Date: 5/22/2021 3:21:00 PM
Indeed, sweet!
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Constance La France
Date: 5/23/2021 10:16:00 AM
Kim, thanks for the compliment, love _Constance
Date: 5/22/2021 2:45:00 PM
Gorgeous piece of writing. Many times, our wishes for the well-being, especially of loved ones, go beyond our own. have a great weekend Constance, love and best regards
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Constance La France
Date: 5/23/2021 10:17:00 AM
Las, thank you for the compliment and the comment, peace _Constance
Date: 5/22/2021 1:41:00 PM
Lovely poem. We always want the best for others... but sometimes life has other ideas. Well penned. Stay well my friend.
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Constance La France
Date: 5/23/2021 10:17:00 AM
David, thank you for the compliment and comment, peace _Constance
Date: 5/22/2021 12:23:00 PM
Hello Constance, it sounds to me you werevery close to your brothers. Just remember the good times you had with your brothers. Hugs. Darlene
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/23/2021 3:32:00 PM
Hello Constance, A strong bond is good. Love Darlene Your welcome my friend.
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Constance La France
Date: 5/23/2021 10:18:00 AM
Darlene, thank you for the comment, yes, we are a strong bond, love _Constance
Date: 5/22/2021 12:06:00 PM
What a lovely story, Constance, about a loving sister and her two little brothers. Yes, how we love to think back on those innocent days, gone forever. You words evoked so many memories in my mind and heart.
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Constance La France
Date: 5/23/2021 10:19:00 AM
Milt, thanks for the compliment and the comment, peace _Constance

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