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Broken Heart

My mind is always thinking My heart is always racing What ever i do i use my heart It flows like water running through my soul Deeper than the ocean floor But i am still on the ground Using your mind might be one of a kind Using your heart its no doubt Its the best place to start When you sleep the mind is at rest As your heart is beating through your chest A broken heart is not forever As long as there will be another A mind that bleeds will end it all A mind that dies and the heart will fall

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/4/2010 9:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week at PoetrySoup Chezaray. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/4/2010 5:11:00 AM
thought provoking poem ... a broken heart is not forever ... lovely line ... congrates on having your wonderful poem featured this week love Jayne
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Date: 10/1/2010 11:43:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed your creativity today. hope u will check out the contest scene to enter and good luck with luv..
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Date: 10/1/2010 6:50:00 AM
Keep the mind strong, and let it sing more sweet songs. Stay strong
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Date: 10/1/2010 5:54:00 AM
Nice and well mexpressed thoughts you have penned on Broken heart, chezaray
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Date: 10/1/2010 5:54:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Chezaray. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you may enter.If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/30/2010 8:46:00 PM
wow, a broken heart indeed, a hope for future mending, enjoyed your write..P.D.
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Date: 9/30/2010 7:38:00 PM
good poem, very deep, keep letting the pen flow as good as the words you express yourself..Te'Arra_poetrysoul:)
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