Bring Me Home
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What I'd like to give you is an ounce of my cologne
wafting refreshing sweetness of childhood vibrancy
reminding you our wondrous after-bath ecstasy
midst strawberry fizz and mandarin, so citrussy
with great splashing moments of fruity baby cologne.
Being nostalgic of our orphanage years and days
I’m thankful to God for providing us loving home
where we enjoyed floral fragrance in our caring dome
exuding lily of the valley and rose, full-blown
in praising Christ for His generous goodness always.
Along your visit, bringing home success-smelling* bliss
my heart cheers for stories of triumphant faith’s delight
oozing with freedom redolence toward heaven height
prevailing through your gifts of aromatic oil flight
spreading bouquet’s therapeutic grand whiff I can’t miss.
Ephesians 5:2 And walk in love, as Christ also hath loved us, and hath given himself for us an offering and a sacrifice to God for a sweetsmelling savour.
(Modified Enclosed Rhyme)
October 4, 2021
8th place, "BRING ME HOME" Poetry Writing Premier Contest
Sponsored by Mystic Rose Rose; judged on 10/4/2021.
Copyright © Beata Agustin | Year Posted 2021
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