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Bring Me Home

"What I'd like to give you,
is an ounce of my perfume."
It is from a cherished bottle,
my late dad give to my mom.
My dad loved the gold bottle,
with the gold~red box.
The scent is sweet,
like roses after a morning dew.
Just a dab will do,
it will linger for hours.
You will smell like a beautiful garden,
everyone will want to sniff you.
Date Written:9/25/2021

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 10/5/2021 10:59:00 PM
Lovely fragrant poem...Delice
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 10/6/2021 11:04:00 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad you like this fragrant write. A true story. Have a blessed day...........
Date: 9/27/2021 8:13:00 AM
This is so sweet Paula. I can see the little bottle your dad loved so much and the gift he gave your mom saying how precious he held her. Great write. God bless, JB
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/27/2021 9:44:00 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad you like this write. It is a true story. Not sure about the colors of gold and red. Have a blessed day...........
Date: 9/27/2021 2:40:00 AM
Love an ounce of your perfume, Paula, along with your lovely poetry.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/27/2021 9:41:00 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad you like my perfume write. I enjoyed writing it. Have a blessed day...........
Date: 9/26/2021 12:00:00 PM
One of the delights of living in Paris, is sitting at a sidewalk cafe whilst being treated to the scents of passing ladies . . . .
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/27/2021 9:40:00 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad you like my write. Sounds like sitting at a your sidewalk cafe is fun. Wish I was there. Have a blessed day...........