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Breathtaking Love

The first time ever I laid my eyes on you- please place the mask over your mouth and nose pulling the elastic strap behind your head; the bag may not inflate even when oxygen is flowing. For the next twenty years. Every time you walk into the room- one, two, three, blow; one, two, three, blow; we're losing him; breathe, sir breathe. Entry in the Breathtaking Love contest

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Date: 5/11/2010 11:24:00 AM
I hope that you intended to say that you met your wife on an airplane(maybe) and she was a stewartess...Or is this metaphoric language?Good luck in the contest..Sara
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Date: 5/10/2010 2:28:00 PM
what a breathtaking write, enjoyed this free verse, and good luck on the contest
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