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Breathless

Left breathless .. A romantic interlude of passion.. Filled with such electricty.. Our magnetic energy intertwined.. Wrapped is.. The unlimited love that we are.. Left breathless.. Soft lips with a taste of sweet honey.. Skin softer then silk.. When we touch .. We both melt like butter.. Left breathless.. Our embrace has taken us to highest.. Of heights.. We become shooting stars.. Massive we are.. Brilliance and splendid.. Explosions of fireworks .. Our magnetic energy intertwined with bliss.. Breathless I am.. As I take a deep breath.. I breathe in the beautiful breath of life.. Our deep love.. Both our souls are dancing lovingly together.. As we glide together in joyful harmony.. Eternally..

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 9/3/2018 2:21:00 PM

The pure happiness and joy of your essence radiates outward, more and more with each line. Up, up, and away! :) gw

Robertina B.
Date: 9/4/2018 8:35:00 PM

Thank you, dear friend.. Your awesome support always makes my day.. Always a pleasure when you visit!!

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 9/3/2018 9:39:00 AM

Super piece Robertina, full of great imagery and insightful thought. I really liked this. Blessings, Gordon

Robertina B.
Date: 9/4/2018 8:34:00 PM

Thank you so much for your kind words and visit, Gordon.. So happy you visited!

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 9/1/2018 9:55:00 PM

Oh this is such a beautiful, romantic piece, dear Robertina! You have so wonderfully expressed the magic of true love as experienced by lovers. Excellent pen, my friend! Best regards and hugs. Pandita

Robertina B.
Date: 9/4/2018 8:33:00 PM

Thank you so much for your lovely visit and words, my friend.. Always a pleasure when you visit!! Many blessings..

Susan Ashley

Date: 8/29/2018 9:10:00 PM

The exquisite emotional imagery in your poem, Robertina, is breathtaking and your poetic portrayal of 'unlimited love'; physically and eternally leaves me breathless in the realms of its beauty. Deep and stunning poetry my dear friend. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan

Robertina B.
Date: 9/4/2018 8:31:00 PM

Your wonderful support means so much, dear friend.. Many, many thanks!! Many Blessings to you, my friend..