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You wrapped your arms around me, hugged me oh so tight Kissed my lips so tenderly – I did not try to put up a fight Told me that you loved me – oh how my heart did lift I was the only one for you, oh such a cherished gift The breath of love flowed from you; I was filled with joy Such divine words any mother can hear from her little boy 02~07~15 Contest: Breath of Love – Gail Angel Doyle

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Jaafar Sadig El Waad

Date: 2/23/2015 3:24:00 AM

Even the father can hear such divine words, for I always feel them when I go home hugged by my small ones! How I like this poem!

Jan Allison
Date: 2/23/2015 5:30:00 AM

Thanks for the lovely words Jaafar :-) hugs Jan xx

Gwen Benita Mason Gibbs

Date: 2/19/2015 9:43:00 AM

Simply lovely

Jan Allison
Date: 2/19/2015 9:45:00 AM

Thanks for all your support Gwen - can't beleive what a journey I have been on in the last year - posted over 500 poems between my own page and that with my writing partner under the name Jadazzle United:-) Hugs Jan xx

Davina Browne

Date: 2/14/2015 6:36:00 AM

love it

Jan Allison
Date: 2/14/2015 6:41:00 AM

Thanks Davina:-) My son is an inspiration to me:-) Hugs jan xx

Julia Ward

Date: 2/13/2015 10:00:00 AM

Hold on to that poem as it is a treasure. Alicia, x

Jan Allison
Date: 2/13/2015 11:48:00 AM

Thanks Alicia:-) Hugs jan xx

Njeri Hunjeri

Date: 2/10/2015 8:23:00 PM

That is true love:) I'll join you in singing it

Jan Allison
Date: 2/11/2015 3:01:00 AM

Thanks so much Njeri:-) Hugs jan xx

Katie-Jayne Boardman

Date: 2/10/2015 6:58:00 PM

I love your use of the phrase "breath of love"

Jan Allison
Date: 2/10/2015 7:01:00 PM

Thanks so much Casey - becoming a mother is the best thing I EVER did in my life:-) Hugs jan xx

Janet Eaton

Date: 2/8/2015 7:07:00 PM

Jan your poem just warmed my heart. So beautiful. Good luck. I so enjoy reading your words. It's a 7 from me. Hugs. Janet

Jan Allison
Date: 2/8/2015 7:19:00 PM

Thanks so much Janet:-) Hugs jan xx

Shane Cooper

Date: 2/8/2015 11:18:00 AM

This is beautiful jan. It is one of the best poems you have written I think. I can see your memories in your words. Something so special the bond between a mother and child. Thank you for sharing this with us dear Jan, I am sure many will empathise with your loving words. I have put it in my favourites and it will be much read. With love and thanks Shane xxx

Shane Cooper
Date: 2/8/2015 12:23:00 PM

I only say what i see, and what i see is truely beautiful. How are you?

Jan Allison
Date: 2/8/2015 11:52:00 AM

Thanks Shane, that is a truly wonderful comment. Being a mother was the best thing EVER to happen in my life:-) Hugs Jan xx

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 2/8/2015 10:01:00 AM

truly a breath of deep beauty jan excellent pen wishing you a blessed sunday

Jan Allison
Date: 2/8/2015 11:52:00 AM

Thanks so much Liam for your lovely comment I do appreciate your support:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 2/7/2015 9:31:00 AM

Awww this is so sweet Jan!

Jan Allison
Date: 2/7/2015 9:41:00 AM

Thanks Richard I thought I would give this contest a go:-) Just hope Gail likes it:-) hugs jan xx

Sandra Haight

Date: 2/7/2015 8:59:00 AM

So beautiful, Jan...the gift of motherhood...the breath of love...you've expressed it so well. Best wishes for the contest. Hugs, Sandra

Jan Allison
Date: 2/7/2015 9:24:00 AM

Thanks so much Sandra - motherhood is the most precious gift i have ever received:-) Hugs jan xx

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/7/2015 8:44:00 AM

Ahh!! Reads like a winner to me..Way to go..A bond that never ends..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Jan Allison
Date: 2/7/2015 9:25:00 AM

Thanks so much Sara:-) Hugs Jan xx

Vincent Flannery

Date: 2/7/2015 7:43:00 AM

Such a wonderful poem with words that framed that picture so well. Great job Jan, very powerful too. Good luck and have a great weekend!

Jan Allison
Date: 2/7/2015 9:25:00 AM

Thanks Vincent - mother's love is the best feeling in the world:-) Hugs jan xx

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 2/7/2015 7:10:00 AM

A miracle of a poem: So angelic and pure love that is depicted here with divine intervention! A seven times seven from me dear, Jan!

Jan Allison
Date: 2/7/2015 9:26:00 AM

Thanks so much Demetrios:-) Hugs jan xx

Deb Wilson

Date: 2/7/2015 6:41:00 AM

Oh my your heart just pours out in this one Jan...it is so awesome! I was never blessed to have children but I can imagine the joy it brings..Just beautiful! Hugs, Deb

Jan Allison
Date: 2/7/2015 9:27:00 AM

I am blessed with only one son Debs:-) Thanks for the lovely comment:-) Hugs jan xxx

Tim Smith

Date: 2/7/2015 6:25:00 AM

So beautiful Jan...There is no greater feeling...hugs Tim

Jan Allison
Date: 2/7/2015 8:57:00 AM

I agree Tim:-) Hugs Jan xx

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 2/7/2015 3:21:00 AM

How beautiful the bond between mother and child.It is the closest feeling to God and human .

Jan Allison
Date: 2/7/2015 5:21:00 AM

It is the most amazing thing Charma - the best thing I ever did in my life was have my son:-) hugs Janxx