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Brain Un-Freeze - 13

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~ Psychosis, carnal - seesaw hips ... melt my manic mass. ~ ~ 1st Place ~ in the "Magicicada 13 - Body and Mind" Poetry Contest, Maureen McGreavy, Sponsor.

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Duncan Chappell

Date: 7/24/2018 10:57:00 AM

a great poem so worth the win god bless

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 7/26/2018 2:22:00 AM

Thank you so much, Duncan - best wishes! :-)

Susan Gentry

Date: 7/2/2018 4:37:00 PM

Congratulations on your #1 win! Unsettling somehow. :)

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 7/2/2018 4:51:00 PM

Thank you, Susan ... it's just about being attracted to the way a woman walks, nothing dark in this one. ;-)

Mick Talbot

Date: 7/2/2018 11:25:00 AM

Lascivious grace, in words, amazing, congratulations Gregory, 1st place in my book too!

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 7/2/2018 11:50:00 AM

Very kind of you, Mick, I'm so pleased you enjoyed it, my friend! :-)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/1/2018 11:19:00 PM

Wicked … wanton … worthiest of its richly deserved podium prize. Hats off to you, my friend, Gershon

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 7/2/2018 11:49:00 AM

Thanks you very much, My Poet Bro - blessings! :-)

Paul Callus

Date: 7/1/2018 5:34:00 PM

This is good and creative, Gregory. Superb end line, including the flowing alliteration. Congrats on placing first. Regards // paul

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 7/2/2018 11:49:00 AM

Many kind thanks, Paul, I greatly appreciate it! :-)

P.M. Richter

Date: 7/1/2018 4:27:00 PM

Great image/poem - congrats on your win!

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 7/2/2018 11:49:00 AM

Thank you so very much, PM! :-)

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 7/1/2018 2:47:00 PM

Swish...Slippery when whet. ;) Congratulations on your first place finish! xomo <3

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 7/2/2018 11:47:00 AM

Thank you so much, Mo - I was very happy to be placed so high, and thankful you liked it! :-) <3

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/30/2018 8:00:00 PM

oh my, that picture really goes well with it. Such an eerie write, Greg!

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 7/2/2018 11:46:00 AM

Thank you so much, Andrea! :-) <3