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Boy Meets Girl

The first time they met, He fell in love with her and Hoped she liked him too. She said he was cute, He always made her laugh and She needed some fun - But she could tell he was not The sort of guy to hurt her. He gave his heart completely. She said she loved him truly. Since she left, he’s been writing Sad, sad poetry. Jack Horne

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John Freeman

Date: 6/13/2011 7:46:00 PM

Jack, Great to see you in the winner's circle. Agape, Moses

Gautami Phookan

Date: 6/10/2011 12:45:00 PM

Congrats Jack on your wonderful win in this contest of Linda's.. gautami

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/9/2011 2:28:00 PM

Congrats..Sara

Wilma Neels

Date: 6/9/2011 12:04:00 PM

Hey there Jack, congratulations on your win in Linda's contest ;)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/9/2011 6:56:00 AM

Congratulations on a well deserved win in Linda-Marie's "Fun and Frolic" contest Jack. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/9/2011 6:54:00 AM

My Congratulations on the win in the contest of Linda

Rick Parise

Date: 6/8/2011 5:36:00 PM

Congrats to you!!!!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/8/2011 5:08:00 PM

Congrats Jack on your fourth place win in my contest luv..

Porsha Jones

Date: 6/5/2011 10:31:00 AM

Aw. This is good writing. Dont let nayone stop you from writing. good luck

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/26/2011 8:56:00 PM

wow, I did a dolphin with these same words and you did this magnificent one about boy meets girl. I think this is MY very favorite of the bunch!!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/24/2011 9:35:00 AM

Jack, I like my fish fried also, but that adds cholesterol. Heck, maybe I'll have some fried grouper or bass. But if I catch a swordfish, grilling is the best! Love, Carolyn

James Foulk

Date: 5/23/2011 9:08:00 AM

this was a touching piece that indeed come from the heart. thank you for your comment on Skies Cloudy.

Gwendolen Song

Date: 5/21/2011 5:29:00 PM

Awwwwwww. This is straight from the heart!! It is true that all of our life experiences, the culmination of them all, transform us into the lovely creatures we are. Your poetry, even if it's a tad sad, is amazing. Don't ever stop writing, Jack. Gwendolen

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/21/2011 3:04:00 PM

Very expressive work..I hope not you but just on a topic..Thanks for letting me know that I placed in a contest..Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/21/2011 1:13:00 PM

oh what a twist Jack at the end.. a great love story turned sour but sad poetry is good for some people so bravo on this one luv.. u always make me smile anyway..

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/21/2011 12:09:00 PM

A very moving poem, my friend. Writing sad poetry does help alleviate some of the pain when a relationship collapses or a loved one dies, Jack. But here's a clue: When a lady says she "needs some fun," she is probably not looking for a romantic relationship. Shame on her for expressing love and then leaving, apparently without much cause. It's excrutiating when someone expresses love and then takes it back. Beauttifully written! Love, Carolyn

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 5/21/2011 11:59:00 AM

Sad write, but lots of meanig.... I wrote "Sad Goodbye" this morning its around the same meaning....

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/21/2011 11:45:00 AM

A wondrful line of tankas.. but, sad girl left boy.. after such a cute meet... thanks for sahring.... take care,..p.d.