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Regally they strut Lions have no ought to roar Status apparent
Establish importance with quiet visibility without vocality (Not for any contest)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 8/2/2019 5:58:00 AM
Very delightful read! =)
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Date: 1/25/2019 8:35:00 AM
Very nicely written!
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Date: 8/19/2018 11:22:00 PM
Oh, you are a beautiful lioness...
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Date: 7/10/2018 8:18:00 AM
So very true! I'm wetting my pants if I just see one! ;)
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Date: 5/28/2018 7:55:00 AM
Clever and fantastic verse. Thanks for sharing. ;) -JWE
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Date: 5/21/2018 10:37:00 PM
Oh my dear Maria, such majesty is expressed in your elegant haiku. They need not roar as their dominant presence speaks for itself. A beautifully exotic poem. Warmest wishes and hugs my lovely friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 5/8/2018 4:19:00 PM
The poetic queen of soup, writes of the king of beast..awesome combination,,love this...
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Date: 5/11/2018 6:38:00 AM
Oh what a lovely title, you make me blush now, and I'm sure there are others here who are far more deserving, but thank you I am truly honored Harry. Thanks always for the support my friend....Maria hugs
Date: 5/7/2018 6:57:00 AM
I love both lions and tigers but tigers are my favorite. Lions live in prides but tigers are solitary animals and extremely powerful too. Both are truly beautiful creatures and man must understand that both are dangerous. You are correct, they need not roar.. A fav my friend.
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Date: 5/11/2018 6:36:00 AM
Thanks so much Robert, both for your lovely comments and visits, I so appreciate it my dear friend. You make a very valid point, tigers are such beautiful animals so are leopards....Maria hugs
Date: 5/2/2018 1:52:00 AM
Excellent. Well executed write. Lion is my favorite animal. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 5/5/2018 8:33:00 AM
Thank you Ravi for your visit and complimentary comment. Much appreciated...Maria :)
Date: 5/1/2018 8:25:00 AM
Superbly done my dear friend...I'm roaring for you...only because I'm a Leo lol...^WW^
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Date: 5/2/2018 12:42:00 AM
Oh are you now? I get on very well with Leos. Thanks WW, both for the visit and comment Lol.....Maria :)
Date: 4/30/2018 7:50:00 PM
Perfect and a FAV!
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Date: 4/26/2018 10:11:00 AM
Hi Maria, excellent Haiku, goes into my faves. The true lion needs not to roar, just needs to be. Have a wonderful Friday. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Date: 4/30/2018 12:25:00 AM
Thanks so much Mike, always a pleasure to see you. Hugs ...Maria xxx
Date: 4/26/2018 8:30:00 AM
Yes! Indeed. Power and majesty in a single glance.
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Date: 4/30/2018 12:25:00 AM
Thanks so much Elaine, both for the lovely visit and comment....Maria xxx
Date: 4/25/2018 4:41:00 PM
Excellent Maria, you are right, lions have no reason to roar. But when he does...RUN (lol) I am learning haiku and I like it ...Cheers! All the best, Charlie
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Date: 4/25/2018 7:30:00 PM
Haha, I'll be there right with you, somehow I don't think we'd stand a chance though. Good luck with the Haiku, quite intriguing it is......Maria :)
Date: 4/25/2018 8:45:00 AM
I would rather live one day as a lion than years as a coward, sadly many who think they are lions are not... nice haiku Maria..
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Date: 4/25/2018 7:28:00 PM
You got it, exactly my sentiments. Thanks for the visit .....Maria :)
Date: 4/24/2018 1:44:00 PM
Truly, there is a special way lions walk that does resemble a regal "strut." You have captured the essence of the creature here, Maria. Wishing you success in the contest. Sending you a Soup mail. Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 4/25/2018 12:35:00 AM
You are so right Carolyn, they really do. Thanks so much for the visit and lovely comments, I do appreciate it, also thanks for letting me know about the Haiku, lol, I was wondering about the lion poems coming up....Maria xxx
Date: 4/23/2018 9:41:00 PM
Ahhh aloha kaikua'ana! (sister) ;*
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Date: 4/24/2018 12:25:00 AM
:) :) Hawaiian Soul Spirit Sister
Date: 4/23/2018 8:31:00 PM
Nice haiku ... Lively and lovely ...
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Date: 4/23/2018 8:34:00 PM
Thanks so much Probir, I appreciate the lovely comment and visit....Maria :)
Date: 4/23/2018 5:59:00 PM
Lol that last line said it ALL! Perfect Maria ;)
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Date: 4/23/2018 8:31:00 PM
Aloha Flo....Yeah sure does lol....Mahalo....Maria :) xxx
Date: 4/23/2018 12:50:00 PM
Hello Maria - To be the king is right. The status is right. You stayed true to the voice and tone. This is marvelous and I enjoyed the theme for I love the cat family whether small or large I love them all. May this day find you well.
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Date: 4/23/2018 8:32:00 PM
Thanks Lisa, lovely to see you my dear. Thanks for the support always my friend....Maria xxx
Date: 4/22/2018 11:05:00 AM
As magestic as the beauty of the Haiku! Enjoyed reading. Stay bright Maria.
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Date: 4/23/2018 3:24:00 AM
Thanks Besma my friend, glad to see that you liked this....Maria xxx
Date: 4/21/2018 7:52:00 PM
Wonderful words Maria. I have always been drawn to the lions. The mane the roar the beauty of that beast is a sight of splendor indeed.
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Date: 4/23/2018 3:23:00 AM
Thanks James, so glad that you enjoyed it.....Maria
Date: 4/20/2018 2:02:00 PM
We look up to leaders not because they 'roar' and put up a show, but because of their vision, passion, intelligence and other qualities. Of course, in the case of your lion, Maria, he is lucky to be a born leader:) ~ warm regards // paul
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Date: 4/21/2018 10:40:00 PM
Thank you Paul - your interpretations is always welcome... Maria Hugs :)
Date: 4/20/2018 3:51:00 AM
So well excecuted..??..my fav animal too
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Date: 4/21/2018 10:39:00 PM
Thank you for your visit Martin...Maria
Date: 4/19/2018 7:56:00 PM
He will always be the King! Fantastic Haiku, my dear. And the Lion King is always my favorite broadway show and the movie too. My gf nicknamed me Mattata from that Movie for I love it so much... Lol! Anyways, Maria, as always, I love your work! Fave all the way ~ Hugs :)
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