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She Dances in Her Blue Dress She stands beneath shimmering clear soft lights in subtle beauteous of elegance. A faint glimmer sparks in her eyes ignites an idyllic aura anxious to dance. She wears a flattering blue amorous of the shoulder, flounce sleeves, body-con dress. Adorned honey ankle strap, glamorous rhinestone high heels; to show off and impress. With the sway of her sexy hips moving She shimmies to the drum beat and fast rhythm leaving behind Chanel glance enthralling fragrant in the crowded room dazzling them. As she turns, walks away in her blue dress Her honey skin purrs with weather's caress. 12/28/2019 Poetry Contest: Blue Dress Sponsored by: Anthony Slausin

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Date: 1/12/2021 6:14:00 PM
Eve, I am writing this after the contest finished, but; after reading it I thought this is gonna knock "em dead, and it surely did, congrats on your win, and to see it a Sonnet form even better, a well deserved win . . . : )
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Date: 1/1/2020 7:27:00 AM
Congratulations on another win, Eve! Lovely poem! ...Fran
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Date: 12/31/2019 7:03:00 PM
Very lyrical, very descriptive--kinda hot! Congrats Eve
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Date: 12/31/2019 10:50:00 AM
Oh wow Eve amazing!;) congratulations on your top win my friend!;)
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Date: 12/29/2019 3:53:00 PM
ohhh what an awesome last line this has on it, Eve. I too chose a dress online to write about, but now i can't locate it to put the picture up!! It was a longer one than yours pictured her, but same beautiful color of blue.
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Date: 12/29/2019 7:22:00 AM
Exquisite details paint her photo in blue--splendidly done, Eve.
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Date: 12/28/2019 11:36:00 PM
Eve.. You are brilliant in creating a beauty in blue.. Good luck in contest..
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Date: 12/28/2019 11:27:00 PM
Hi Eve, I like the blue dressed poem shimmying to the beat. Good luck in the contest. -Richard
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Date: 12/28/2019 9:16:00 PM
And the caress of the crowd's eyes ;) Awesome piece full of such vivid imagery! Well done, Eve :)
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