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Feelings of saddness. Alone in the dark halls of my heart. Dream of darkness. Saddness overwhelms the soul. Talk to me so I'm not alone. Teresa Skyles Entered in Francine Roberts"blue"contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/9/2011 7:37:00 PM
Ahh, you took the sad path, and did very well with it, sweetie!
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Date: 2/9/2011 3:52:00 PM
Reads like a winner to me..Good luck..Sara
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Date: 2/9/2011 3:19:00 PM
Nice creative write on the blue feelings, Teresa. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 2/9/2011 3:09:00 PM
Very good Teresa, I love the feelings expressed...luv Michael
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Date: 2/9/2011 2:22:00 PM
Nice writing. Just remove the apostrophe from "feeling's". No genitive or possessive case exists there. The word is merely pluralized.
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