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~ Bottoms up, with a twist ~
*Word count* 1-8

Author's Note- To be read from the bottom first, and then read from the top- back to the bottom.

in your world, i am your breathtaking blue - love, caressing the edge of your heart, i have become your morning glory - elegant eyes dipped in chocolate - these snow white curves wavy golden locks, curl around you - ------------

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Joseph May

Date: 8/6/2023 1:26:00 PM

The sensual curl of your words is truly lovely, Great write Brandy

Brandy Nicole
Date: 8/6/2023 5:00:00 PM

Thank you, Joseph. Such a wonderful thing to say. I appreciate you and your lovely comment. :) Hugs, Brandy

Mark Toney

Date: 9/11/2018 11:10:00 AM

Brandy, your "Bottom's up, with a twist" poem left me somewhat dizzy and in need of a chiropractor! All kidding aside, a lovely poem it is. I'm with Tobey in appreciating your use of different styles. What else might you bring forth from your plenteous poetry paraphernalia? Hmmm...We shall see :)

Brandy Nicole
Date: 9/11/2018 12:00:00 PM

Soft giggle. :) Didn't mean to get you dizzy. I do appreciate your kind words. Me?! Bring something new and different here?? I think so. :) Thank you Mark for your wonderful comment. ~ Brandy

Tobey Hill

Date: 9/10/2018 12:29:00 PM

Very creative! Your exploration of all of these different styles is admirable. Speaking of hearts, this layout lacks just a little on top in making a visual heart. Well done...TAH

Brandy Nicole
Date: 9/10/2018 6:44:00 PM

You are right, by placing a top to this poem, it would look like a heart. :) Thank you Tobey. I truly enjoy using different forms at times. It can be challenging, but it is fun. I appreciate your thoughts. ~ Brandy

Winged Warrior

Date: 9/8/2018 3:26:00 PM

To blue or not to blue...I'm a red kind of guy lol...impressive is your reversible...love & light...^WW^

Brandy Nicole
Date: 9/8/2018 3:43:00 PM

:) Yes, that is question. To be, or not to be. "Blue" Thank you Winged Warrior. I enjoyed creating this. :) And- blue always melts me, especially blue eyes. (I don't know why) Also, red is my favorite color. I appreciate your thoughts. Color me happy!!! :) Brandy

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/7/2018 7:01:00 AM

Words of romance and love cleverly rendered..well done, Brandy.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 9/7/2018 6:42:00 PM

It is very kind of you to leave your thoughts upon my poetic whispers. Thank you Vijay. :) Brandy

John Gondolf

Date: 9/6/2018 9:56:00 PM

Beautifully written, Brandy, soft and romantic as all your poems are and very creative and clever. Love those snow white curves... John

Brandy Nicole
Date: 9/6/2018 10:30:00 PM

Your thoughts bring a smile. :) Such a sweet thing to say. And I am just simple poetic me. Thank you John for being so kind. ~ Brandy