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aware of our stupor centreless as is vapour whilst yet remaining stuporous in time stretched stillness continuous in tranquil recognition of what is as it is diminishing not the elixirous bliss fizz innocence poised in nonchalance within current of life’s vibrance according no preference to hues of our luminescence blurring boundaries with the void remaining for eternity by God buoyed 03-January-2022

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Date: 1/3/2022 1:35:00 AM
Your poem is so well writ and I admire that last line.
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Date: 1/3/2022 4:48:00 AM
Thank you, Victor!
Date: 1/2/2022 8:23:00 PM
I shall take pains not to diminish the 'elixirous bliss fizz.' Almost other-worldly! Cosmic Pixie-Dust, Gershon
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Date: 1/3/2022 4:48:00 AM
:)

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