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Bliss

You breathe as I breathe, your heart beats as mine; our souls are as one for our lips taste that wine that comes from our knowing we'll always have this, two hearts and one love consecrated in bliss.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/18/2009 2:26:00 PM
Completely blissful, Cumquat!! XOXO
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Date: 4/27/2009 10:26:00 AM
Very nice, Keith. It must be wonderful to feel such "Bliss." Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/27/2009 10:18:00 AM
Anyone who's met their soulmate will agree with this beautifully penned poem, Keith! Bravo! ~Trudy~
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Date: 4/27/2009 6:58:00 AM
Breath-taking.....bliss is truly the right word. !!
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Date: 4/27/2009 6:42:00 AM
Very beautiful poem.
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Date: 4/27/2009 6:12:00 AM
Mr. Bickerstaffe this is going to my favorites, I really like it. A completed love from beginning to end, bliss
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Date: 4/27/2009 5:06:00 AM
Love the last two lines..joining of two becoming one..well written.
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