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Bliss -Dh

In a peaceful place where there is no name for hurt or worry. . . even as I drift time is standing still. Embracing sweet sound and beauty, I smell colors and taste fragrance. Where am I? Could this place be heaven? I shall call it BLISS Jan 24, 2019 for charles messina's Any Theme Diminished Hexaverse Poetry Contest

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Sandra L. Weiss

Date: 2/22/2019 8:56:00 PM

Congrats, Andrea, on your well deserved win.

Joseph May

Date: 1/27/2019 7:59:00 PM

I love how you ended it Andrea..Congrats on your win..

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 1/27/2019 7:26:00 PM

I shall call it - a winner! Congratulations, Andrea!

Martin Brown

Date: 1/27/2019 4:26:00 PM

The bliss of how it should be.

Gary Smith

Date: 1/27/2019 3:31:00 PM

Just lovely Andrea, congrats. :)

Laura Leiser

Date: 1/27/2019 3:28:00 PM

Your described bliss so well in your excellent DH poem, Andrea! Congrats on your win! :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/27/2019 3:06:00 PM

This is wonderful Andrea! I want to live on bliss! : ) xxoo

Alexis Y.

Date: 1/27/2019 9:16:00 AM

Hi Andrea, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your placement in the contest:-) Alexis

Charles Messina

Date: 1/27/2019 9:15:00 AM

A wonderful poem and take on the contest, Andrea. Great job on this form! Congratulations on your 2nd place win. Hugs Charlie :)

Jean Murray

Date: 1/26/2019 6:13:00 PM

Blissful!

Susan Mills

Date: 1/26/2019 5:48:00 PM

You speak words I do not even know about. Impressive work.

Silent One

Date: 1/26/2019 8:31:00 AM

Sounds like bliss Andrea.. A place we all want to be..

Manny Paras

Date: 1/26/2019 7:38:00 AM

Hey, hey Andrea, good to know you are in a place of bliss. I am nowhere, my muse took a long leave but tried to put in a line here. Smile!

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 1/26/2019 4:41:00 PM

Not really there but just imagining it. Hahaha

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 1/25/2019 8:14:00 PM

I love your perfectly hexed verse, winning wishes for you Andrea, and a hug .

Harry Horsman

Date: 1/25/2019 4:33:00 PM

I miss you Andrea not being here as much as i like,,,yes your poetry speaks to the reader.. love this.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 1/25/2019 2:38:00 PM

I love this one; had to "fav".

Caycay Jennings

Date: 1/25/2019 4:56:00 AM

Very well done! Why DM by the title? Is it just for diminished hexaverse? I like your topic, delivery and the entire write through to that wonderful last word. Love ... CayCay

Alexis Y.

Date: 1/24/2019 5:55:00 PM

WoW! Andrea, You nailed it ! I see a good description of bliss. I hope everyone can experience a bliss such as this. It looks like a winner to me. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 1/24/2019 6:49:00 PM

thanks, Alexis! For me, it would be akin to something beyond our mortal comprehension.

Bette Bavington

Date: 1/24/2019 4:51:00 PM

I don't have to go looking for a place of peace. It follows me. I am thankful to God there is no place like home. Nice hexaverse.

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 1/24/2019 6:50:00 PM

thanks, Bette. This is my imagination of a state of being that we could be capable of in another realm. Of course, I already know happiness here on earth!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 1/24/2019 3:38:00 PM

Hopefully they are both blissful - bliss and heaven. Nice diminshed hexaverse, Andrea.