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Bleeding Moon

As the moon bled into the night, The waves danced with the lilting wind, He stood there remembering her, how their souls merged Like the sand and the sea... Excerpt from "Sea Of Life - revised" 08.28.2021 For Greg Barden's "Liberum Divisa 7" contest

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Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 11/9/2021 6:21:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win! A masterpiece! Blessings, Paulette

John Watt

Date: 11/4/2021 4:48:00 PM

Jo, I love your rich imagery with the conjoining of moon and night, waves and wind, sand and sea to portray the merging of two human souls. Simply breathtaking. Big congrats for your well-deserved trophy win ~ John

Anisha Dutta

Date: 11/4/2021 9:47:00 AM

BIG CONGRATS to win TOP. Have a good day.

Caycay Jennings

Date: 11/2/2021 11:49:00 PM

Beautiful! Your pen is once again flowing with creativity. It's funny, but some vague memory makes me feel as though your poem is about me. I mean, of course, it isn't, but I have had more than my shares of good-byes to people / places I cared for. Felt this and I liked it! CayCay

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 11/1/2021 5:29:00 PM

So alluring and romantic, congratulations on your first place win!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/1/2021 11:44:00 AM

ahhh, so wonderful. Congrats on top win.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 11/1/2021 10:49:00 AM

Jo, congratulations on your trophy win! Wonderfully vivid picture and images that tell the story of this memory. Blessings to you my friend!

Constance La France

Date: 11/1/2021 6:35:00 AM

Jo, beautiful four lines and congratulations on your win in the contest ~friendship and poetry _Constance

Beata Agustin

Date: 11/1/2021 5:44:00 AM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... God bless you.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 10/31/2021 8:11:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A "Beautiful" write and picture. "Love It." Have a great/blessed autumn day.....................

Francis J Grasso

Date: 10/31/2021 5:56:00 AM

Congratulations for your top honors win, Jo! A beautiful piece. ...Fran

John Lusardi

Date: 10/31/2021 12:41:00 AM

A well deserved win, the opening line, draws the reader in. And then, gently let out. Excellent.

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 10/30/2021 7:03:00 PM

Congratulations on your trophy win, Jo, there were a LOT of great entries this time, but this one just spoke to me a bit louder - love it! Blessings! - the bard

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 9/1/2021 4:20:00 AM

This is awesome Jo... Beautiful imagery... Best wishes in the contest... Hugs... ~ Ani ..

Rama Balasubramanian

Date: 8/31/2021 4:49:00 AM

Simply awesome. Much conveyed in few lines. A winner for me

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/29/2021 10:24:00 AM

I love what you chose!! Hope it will be a winner for you!!

Alexis Y.

Date: 8/28/2021 8:55:00 AM

Wow! Jo, These four lines are good. Now I have to read the poem that they were taken from. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day and weekend:-) Alexis